Posted on | January 28, 2011 | 6 Comments |

Flash Fiction Friday Challenge


Use the picture above to write a flash fiction of 93-129 words. Use this phrase in your submission: “…held protectively…”


She liked surprising him. A toy; a newly-learned maneuver; an eventful journey. This surprise was different.

She waited abed, clad in underwear and a smile. When he arrived he smiled then kissed her, appreciative of her attire.

“Did you want something, my love?”

“Oh, I do.” Her eyes gleamed, knowingly. “Hang up your coat, then join me.”

His coat was held protectively in one arm, and she watched intently as opened the closet. She did so hope he’d like what he found within!

His sharp intake of breath was just as she’d hoped. Not to mention the expressions of embarrassment, lust, and joy slipping across the countenance of her surprise, as she stepped into the light.

She liked surprises. What better than one for them both?

126 words.

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6 Responses to “Surprise”

  1. Rozewolf
    January 29th, 2011 @ 10:52 am

    Ah a beautiful prezzie!!! I bet she spent hours checking it out to make sure it was just right! Love the change up from some of the other FFF.

  2. Dee
    January 29th, 2011 @ 6:00 pm

    *beams* Thank you Roze!

    xx Dee

  3. David
    January 30th, 2011 @ 4:57 am

    A wonderful surprise indeed. “do hang up your coat” a nice trick. Hope you return next week as well. Nicely done.

  4. Dee
    January 30th, 2011 @ 8:02 pm

    Thank you David! I only do FFF when the image calls to me. And this one certainly did :)

    xx Dee

  5. Hedone
    January 31st, 2011 @ 7:41 am

    A gift that keeps on giving 😉

  6. Dee
    January 31st, 2011 @ 11:16 am

    *chuckle* Indeed, Hedone :)

    xx Dee


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