Torrential

Posted on | July 9, 2010 | 11 Comments |

See the Flash Fiction Friday challenge and image here!

Torrential

He is driving into her

She is driving onto him

He is beating into her

She is beating onto him

He is hammering into her

She is hammering onto him

They are driving together

Crashing titanically

Beating against each other

Drowning out themselves

Hammering headlong

Flashes:

Driven

Beaten

Hammered

Drenched

Torrentially fucked

Exhausted

53 words.

Twitter Tumblr Reddit Digg Stumbleupon Pinterest Facebook Plusone Email

flattr this!

Comments

11 Responses to “Torrential”

  1. Miss Magenta
    July 10th, 2010 @ 5:06 am

    Love so much! So simple yet so vivid- well done!

    xx MM

  2. Chocolate Puss
    July 12th, 2010 @ 12:35 am

    I love this, too. Very vivid, indeed.

  3. Dee
    July 12th, 2010 @ 5:34 pm

    MM – Thank you, hon. I really do like doing these flash fictions!

    Chocolate Puss – Vivid is a great word. I love that you’re using it to describe my writing. Thank you!

    xx Dee

  4. The Panserbjørne
    July 13th, 2010 @ 2:28 am

    Driven, beaten, hammered…and so very very vivid, as CP said! Short and poetic both. Either one is difficult enough; both at the same time, REALLY difficult.

    How nice of you to share your talents with us this week, Dee. Thanks for playing along!

    — PB

  5. Lexi
    July 13th, 2010 @ 9:35 am

    And this is why I say that the rest of you are like unto gods and have talent that far eclipses mine. Poetry… oooh baby. You can feel the slamming.

  6. Spring Flower
    July 13th, 2010 @ 1:39 pm

    Loved it – short and powerful.

  7. Dee
    July 13th, 2010 @ 4:19 pm

    PB – I like doing poetry, but I’m not often moved to do so these days.

    Lexi – *slams*

    Spring Flower – Thank you!

    xx Dee

  8. Dana
    July 13th, 2010 @ 7:58 pm

    I usually don’t comment on these things, but damn women you are talented! Always inspiring – can’t seem to keep my brain in one spot long enough to write anything at the moment but I just love your style and you really encourage me.

    That poem is fucking hot, and I love the style. The picture is great too. Grins all round here.

  9. Dee
    July 14th, 2010 @ 12:53 pm

    Glad to get you grinning, hon!

    xx Dee

  10. nilla
    July 16th, 2010 @ 1:09 am

    oh, i’m so glad i *finally* came to visit!!! Oh that is just wonderfully done…i love the stacatto pacing of the words, the way you chose to utilize the required phrasing…lucious…

    hot n bothered,

    nilla

  11. Dee
    July 16th, 2010 @ 9:39 am

    I made you hot n bothered, nilla? I call that a win!

    xx Dee


  

  • Buttons!






  • flattr this!
  • Copyright

    Copyright © 2006 - 2014
    Curvaceous Dee
    All rights reserved

    If you wish to utilise content on my site beyond that permitted to you by applicable copyright law, please contact me to make arrangements.

  • Recent Posts

  • Recent Comments

  • Archives

  • Categories

  • Meta

  • Copyright © 2006 - 2014 Curvaceous Dee All rights reserved.

    Switch to Mobile Theme