Refuelling

Posted on | May 7, 2010 | 11 Comments |

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Refuelling

What do you think you’re doing?”

He started nervously. “Er, having something to eat?”

“A banana, I see.” There was a tone in her voice, and his pulse jumped.

“Yes. After last night, and the early hours, and then this morning …” he trailed off. “I was hungry.”

“Hungry,” she repeated. “In that case, there’s something I’d much rather you were eating …”

It wasn’t a banana. But he wasn’t complaining – he always did love the taste of her cock.

80 words.

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11 Responses to “Refuelling”

  1. Miss Magenta
    May 8th, 2010 @ 12:30 am

    I do quite like the ending of this one, is it a metaphor or…? Either way, two thumbs up!

    xo MM

  2. Lila
    May 8th, 2010 @ 2:50 am

    Ooh, I like this one! lovely surprise ending. :D

  3. Gray
    May 8th, 2010 @ 2:27 am

    *laughs* Oh wow, I didn’t expect that ending. Happy Flash Fiction Friday!:)

  4. Iona
    May 8th, 2010 @ 5:29 am

    Buwhahaha! Frame of reference completely upended in that last wee sentence. Thank you for a bit of nice early morning mind fuckery!

    xxx

  5. Dee
    May 8th, 2010 @ 9:45 am

    *cough* Can y’all tell I’ve been having a really great time wearing (and using) my Share XL? Review shortly :)

    Glad you all liked!

    xx Dee

  6. netsfan44
    May 8th, 2010 @ 9:21 am

    Love to help him with THAT *smile* good story !

  7. Hylas
    May 8th, 2010 @ 8:16 pm

    Hehehe, not such a surprise ending to me :)

  8. Spring Flower
    May 9th, 2010 @ 9:00 am

    I love bananas too… ;-)

  9. Dee
    May 9th, 2010 @ 11:41 am

    Hylas, you should have been expecting it, yes!

    Spring Flower, hooray for bananas :)

    xx Dee

  10. The Panserbjørne
    May 11th, 2010 @ 2:22 am

    Now THERE’S an unexpected take. I’ll bet that sentence isn’t one you see very often in stories: “He always did love the taste of her cock.” Heh.

    Thanks for playing, Dee!

    — PB

  11. Dee
    May 11th, 2010 @ 2:00 pm

    Always a pleasure, PB :)

    xx Dee


  

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